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Post at 2007-6-22 09:02  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
could you do me a favor for this email?

this letter may be very simple to you, but for me, it is a little difficult. , for i am a caininao in english
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i would like to ask the customer about the test result of last sample, and recommend our new products to him. how should i choose the right words to express my thinking? below is the email i writed just now. if you have any suggestion or you think the letter should be writed in other way, please kindly tell me. Many Tks forum.fobshanghai.com3a+U5G+@"|!C+J#x
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we haven't contact for quite a while. I didn't met you on guangzhou exbihition last month.How are you? are you in China or Spain now? How about the samples we sent you months ago? are you satisfied with the quality? recently our lab develop some new good color, such as pr. yellow, V.Blue, may i know if you have any interest in them? if so, please kindly tell me, We will send them to you immediatly.
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is it OK? if not, how should i write this letter?

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since he hasnt given you any infomation abt the samples you sent for months, why still sent him emailforum.fobshanghai.com4U!U:R8Z/~

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Post at 2007-6-22 09:22  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy  QQ
Grammar Corrections:

I am not gonna make comments on the letter itself but you should at least pay more attention to the grammar.FOB Business Forum1T;_#l K3i)I
1 we haven't contact for quite a while=We haven't contacted for quite a while.forum.fobshanghai.com:N1V;S%g+`.[,h2k&|"^7N.W7o
2 I didn't met you on guangzhou exbihition last month. = I didn't meet you in Cantong Fair....FOB Business Forum7S4j&K4U/I!y
3 are you in China or Spain= Are you........
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Post at 2007-6-22 09:38  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
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I think you should make a key about your aim,enquiry sample condition not for other words.
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you should set up type well.
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the second:enquriy about sample,like quality,spec,and some unsatisfation or his any words about sample.
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the third:tell him you have new color,and want to introduce to him(send your photo to him is best)

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Post at 2007-6-22 10:09  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
I think you need not say so many trashy things, becase time is money for both. It will delay the test result, so you should not sent him another samples before you receive the test result. forum.fobshanghai.com9?5x0|(v#W.l0\&m
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Dear Mr. Mauro,
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'Y3`$p9w8X!\0o)x9@(J2D7Uforum.fobshanghai.comHow is the test result about the samples we sent you months ago? I hope it has passed the test, so we will have opportunity to work together.
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too  many ??????
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Post at 2007-6-22 10:23  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
Well, I think it is ok to send a email about those uncertainty things. Anyway, the business need communication and cooperation. Certain connection is necessary.

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Post at 2007-6-22 14:01  Profile  Space  P.M.  Buddy 
Reply #2 andersen2008's post

if i don't send to the customer who got the sample but give no reply, i will have no customer.

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Reply #3 Holypoopoo's post

thank you forum.fobshanghai.com'N!_-H!b4Y$w-\(F(w:r
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Reply #7 christina520's post

thank you for your suggestion,
7@!m's2A A'],A4l(u-kfor the photo, the quality of our product can't be found by the photo, it must be test

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Reply #8 janefmyj's post

thank you , but our manager said that he must have forgotten our last sample, and now the aim of this email is to recommend new color to him

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Reply #10 hsmengke's post

thank you

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