my boss ask me to conncet with an old customer in Croatia with a e-mail:FOB Business Forum1e5n3n+E4y7I6k

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IT IS FOR LONG TIME THAT WE HAVE NOT CONNECTED WITH EACH OTHER AND WE WISH THAT YOUR BUSINESS IS BETTER AND BETTER.FOB Business Forum,Q/e)L/]$a+G2{#i
WE WONDER THAT  IF YOU ARE IN THE MARKET FOR THE GOODS THAT COVERS IN OUR LINES, PLEASE INFORME US ASAP.
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I think at first you should ask your boss something about this customer, and the former connection informations, since so long not touch with each other, do they still remember your boss your factory. I think first you should simple introduce your facotry, mention about the former contacting circumstance; then tell them why not concact them recently. also some formula, some patterns. keeping touch with each other. It is not a hard thing for you, I think. If possilbe, after writing the e-mail, send a fax to them or directl call them.

maybe you can revise it... here is my suggestion:forum.fobshanghai.com+^8O8S8a3K)j4\
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!Z,@/V7h"f8P"TFOB Business ForumIt has been a long time since we have contact with you.  I hope your business is doing good.
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#F!p&c7U(a-s5h:iFOB Business ForumThank you.

i agree with the two above. qqtsp,please write in small letter ,but not capital letter next time,for the capital letter is difficult to read.thanks!

you english is so good.would you mind please tell me you  MSN?

This letter is ok,just send it out

that's all right. do not worry about it.

oh, it is very kind of you , best wishes

in my opinion ,you should not use the capital letter in all of your letter.it's hard for reading.

i think this letter is very ok,just send it out ,do not worry.

i support "Abbyhu",the bit letter is too difficult to read,i always in left bed imprission about this email.

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if you want change,i think Camei's letter is better!and your leeter is good,if i am the custmor i don't like SwaninCn's letter .I am sorry i tell the truth!

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