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We obtained your name and address from the international internet in March 2004 and we know that you are interested in Telecontrol Racing Car produced in China. Now , we are writing to you to hope establish business relations with you . }-mkvP
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Our company was founded in 1952, specialized in toy and handicraft,
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Our product hold high reputation by the clients in the world wide with the high quality and favorable price.
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In order to give you a gengral idea of various kinds of product that we are handling, we are airmailing you under separate cover our latest catalogue for your reference. Please let us know immediately if you are interested in our products.n`$Vm9i2J[

(PT|:c? D:X We look forward to your early reply.
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3V!ysP?} We have received your letter together with your catalogues. Having thoroughly studied the catalogues, we find that your Telecontrol Racing Cars Art. No. 18812, 18814, 18817 and 18819 are quite suitable for our market. We may need one 20' FCL each for JANUARY delivery. Please kindly inform us if you are able to supply and quote us your most favorable price for the above goods on the basis of CIFC3 NEWYORK with details, including packing, shipment, insurance and payment.Qf2C7Id)X X
              
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We are pleased to receive your inquiry of DEC 26,2005and to hear that you are interested in our Telecontrol Racing Cars Art series.We would like to quote as follows based on per 20??FCL.Quantiites less than that are slghtly higher._v"nk9\

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        18817        USD23.75        100carton_Ejua1s%@9M:U
        18819        USD24.89        200carton
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As to 18817, 20 cars per carton.
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Insurance:For 110% invoice value covering All Risk, and War Risk.
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As we are receiving orders day to day and our resent stocks are nearly exhausted,we would advise you to place an order as soon as possible if deliveries are required to be prompt.
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We write to thank you for your offer of April22,2004. However after a careful study of your quotation, we find that your price seems to be on the high side. It will leave us with almost no profit to accept your price.
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&M9y`_`/A:G We appreciate the quality of your products and are glad to have the opportunity to do business with you. We suggest that you make some allowance on your price. For your reference, the highest prices we can accept are as follows:
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Thanks for you sharing

Very appreciated for your so kind sharing.
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i don't understand the products:L

thanks for your sharing,i think i have studied some usefulthing in your mail...:loveliness:

You are so welcome!
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'mJ C3z:w I don't understand the products also. Just read the email carefully,
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Hope everyone can learn something from it. And also looking forward to share your experience.:loveliness:

Reply #6 angela66's post

Thanks for your share. Maybe you should learn more about your product which is helpful for you to communicate with your customers I think. A8Mm1@b:N T"~ V$AQ,W
Go ahead and good luck.

It is copy from the book. It is a general one. you can chose some sentences but can't copy the letter

yes, it is copy from one book i read, the products also are not what i am selling, i am sorry for making Mazy to misunderstand. U lB C~-W!c

w%f _#bm!wy0L Write here,just feel it is useful when the new hand send mails to clients, maybe can use some sentence in these mails.

Thank you  for sharing, I am just a greenhorn in this field:L

Reply #10 Joyart's post

green hand meets  greenhorn.:handshake
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