could you do me a favor for this email?

this letter may be very simple to you, but for me, it is a little difficult.:L :D , for i am a caininao in english,dFd$m"qb`wT?z6L

Q? xZ^9Uk*O2l i would like to ask the customer about the test result of last sample, and recommend our new products to him. how should i choose the right words to express my thinking? below is the email i writed just now. if you have any suggestion or you think the letter should be writed in other way, please kindly tell me. Many Tks:P
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W/Cp;m)X9P we haven't contact for quite a while. I didn't met you on guangzhou exbihition last month.How are you? are you in China or Spain now? How about the samples we sent you months ago? are you satisfied with the quality? recently our lab develop some new good color, such as pr. yellow, V.Blue, may i know if you have any interest in them? if so, please kindly tell me, We will send them to you immediatly.
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is it OK? if not, how should i write this letter?

since he hasnt given you any infomation abt the samples you sent for months, why still sent him email
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1 we haven't contact for quite a while=We haven't contacted for quite a while.
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I think you should make a key about your aim,enquiry sample condition not for other words.:z%A;XK3{ U9u3HD
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the second:enquriy about sample,like quality,spec,and some unsatisfation or his any words about sample.
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the third:tell him you have new color,and want to introduce to him(send your photo to him is best)

I think you need not say so many trashy things, becase time is money for both. It will delay the test result, so you should not sent him another samples before you receive the test result. 'K0YWkxzA
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How is the test result about the samples we sent you months ago? I hope it has passed the test, so we will have opportunity to work together. M?aprf?g7|
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Looking forward to your good news.

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if i'm your customer ,will have big headache;P ;P ;P ;P ;P ;P ;P

Well, I think it is ok to send a email about those uncertainty things. Anyway, the business need communication and cooperation. Certain connection is necessary.

Reply #2 andersen2008's post

if i don't send to the customer who got the sample but give no reply, i will have no customer.

Reply #3 Holypoopoo's post

thank you:) u*sb+mrlY,dtG
i will try to ....

Reply #7 christina520's post

thank you for your suggestion,:) G+{@4M;Fk&fY
for the photo, the quality of our product can't be found by the photo, it must be test

Reply #8 janefmyj's post

thank you:) , but our manager said that he must have forgotten our last sample, and now the aim of this email is to recommend new color to him:D

Reply #10 hsmengke's post

thank you:P

Reply #9 smellflowers's post

you mean i have writed too much in this email?:o
hQ D}@? hehe, maybe

FOB Forum is quite warmhearted anytime,so many people here are terrific.:)

you should highlight yr advantage, such as price, quality, both of which can  absorb his attention, you know there are so many supppliers everywhere. why he must choose you, not others. you must be better than others, not commonplace. that is essential.
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Moreover, you should inquire him the feedback, not hasten and hasten, he may be tired.

thank you for sharing ..........

I like fobshanghai

some grammar mistakes

There are so many good-hearted man to help you ,come on ,baby!
-O)`0m3w` ? I can learn a lot from yours,my friends in here!So happy now!;P :hug: